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Warning this is a fanfic done with the characters of Spiral: Suiri no Kizuna (The Bonds of Reasoning) that belong to Shirodaira Kio and Eita Mizuno
I hope you enjoy this fanfic

Celosos

It was a normal day Ayumu and Hiyono go to school as they use to go every day
(In school at lunch time in the news paper club room)
Hiyono: Narumi-san! Narumi-san!
Ayumu: what the matter?
Hiyono: What you brought for lunch today?
Ayumu: Well I brought some rice and..................... eh!
When Ayumu look at his bento, it wasn’t there Hiyono had his bento
Ayumu: Give it back!
Hiyono: ah! Narumi-san is bad not to share
Ayumu: and took people bento is bad too
Hiyono: Narumi-san is it so bad with me?
*dramatic moment she drops to the floor and start crying*
Ayumu: *sigh* have you found any information of the murder that happened yesterday?
Hiyono: not yet apparently the murdered left without leaving any trace, and so far no one have any kind of information
Ayumu: mmmm
Hiyono: "Narumi-san really is focusing a lot in this case I would like to help him with something"
  Later in the classroom Ayumu
Teacher: Good afternoon, today I want to introduce you a new student!
Ayumu: *sigh*
Teacher: Well, I'll present you Hizumi Mizushiro
Hizumi: hello! To all of you ^^
Hizumi then sit beside Ayumu
Hizumi: hi! I hope we can be friends ^^
Ayumu: ah! Yes I hope that too
(Later after school)
Hiyono: hurry Narumi-san!
Ayumu: Coming……………
When Ayumu and Hiyono were walking Hiyono encountered with Hizumi and Hiyono falls over Hizumi
Hiyono: ah! I-I’m sorry
Hizumi: jajaja don’t worry
So Hizumi look at Hiyono very firmly
Hizumi: "She looks exactly as........................" (Hizumi though)
Hiyono: sorry *gets up and helps him stand up*
Ayumu: let’s just go
Hiyono: ah! Narumi-san wait!
Then Ayumu and Hiyono left and then Hizumi stay thinking of Hiyono
(Several days later)
Hiyono: Narumi-san!
Ayumu: what?
Hiyono: Lately I feel as if someone was watching me
Ayumu: it’s only your imagination
He said while he continuing watching on his cooking program
Hiyono: *sigh*
Knock knock (knocked the door of the news paper club)
Hiyono: come in!
A boy with green hair comes in to the room
Hiyono: Hizumi-san!
Hizumi: Hiyono-chan
Hiyono: Why have you come? Ah! Do you want to join the club?
Hizumi: no I’m sorry I came to do something else
Hiyono: ?
Hizumi: I just wanted to ask you if maybe you want to see a movie with me.
Ayumu and Hiyono: eeeeehhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hizumi: w-why are you so impressed about?
Hiyono: well b-because the thing is that 0//0 n-no boy has asked me that before 0//0
Hizumi: eeeehhhh !!!!!!
Hiyono: I-I’m sorry
Hizumi: well do you want to go with me?
Hiyono: o-ok
Hizumi: Well, I see you tomorrow in front of the park ok?
Hiyono: ah! okay
Hizumi leave the room
Ayumu: wait! Are you really going out with him?
Hiyono: sure ^-^ it’s just a movie………… well, see you later I’m going home to see what I’m going to wear for tomorrow
Ayumu: wait…
Hiyono: bye Narumi-san
Ayumu: *though* there something suspicious about him
Next day at the park Hizumi is waiting for Hiyono
Hizumi: Hiyono over here
Hiyono: sorry I’m late
Hizumi: its ok I only got here couples of minutes ago……… so where do you want to go first the movie don’t start for another hour
Hiyono: how about ice cream?
Hizumi: that sounds perfect to me *beautiful smile*
*Hiyono gets a little red*
Hizumi: let’s go
Different scene
1. Their eating ice cream Hiyono got a little on her chick and Hizumi helps getting it clean
2. Take their pictures
3. Went to the arcade
While their entering to the movies Ayumu was hiding and following them
Hizumi: ah! Hiyono we better hurry because the movie will start soon
Hiyono: ok, I have a question
Hizumi: what is it?
Hiyono: what movie did you choose?
Hizumi: well I choose a scary movie…………… is that ok?
Hiyono: it’s okay ^-^
Hizumi: “hehe with a scary movie it’s obvious that Hiyono will get scared and she will be all over me hehehe” Hizumi though  
(Inside the theater)
Hizumi: “OMG I never thought this movie will be so scary even I am scared and Hiyono is actually enjoying the movie T-T” (Hizumi though)
And Ayumu was 3 chairs behind Hiyono and Hizumi
Then in the movie there were a part where a man was killing a woman and when Hizumi saw that part he get so scared that he throw his popcorn and hug Hiyono. The bucket of popcorn ends up in Ayumu head.    
Ayumu: grrrrr >-<
Hiyono: Ah! Hizumi-san are you alright?
Hizumi: ah! I’m sorry ^^;
He let go of Hiyono  
Hiyono: it’s alright ^^
So they continued watching the movie
(The other day in school in lunch time)
Hizumi: hey Hiyono-chan did you have fun last night?
Hiyono: ah! Hizumi-san sure I did
Ayumu was passing by
Hiyono: oh Narumi-san wait for me…………… well see you later Hizumi- san
*Hizumi expression is mad a looks a little evil*
Ayumu: I need to talk to you
Hiyono: what is it?
Ayumu: not her lets go to the roof
Later on the roof
Hiyono: what’s going on?
Ayumu: ok I investigate a little about Hizumi and I found out that he is a Blade Children
Hiyono: wait a minute why all of a sudden you decide to investigate him?
Ayumu: 0///0 that doesn’t matter *cough* well as I was saying you can’t hang out with him
Hiyono: why not? Because he a blade children?.................. that doesn’t mean anything
Ayumu: well don’t you know the blade children?
Hiyono: well yes but………… wait………don’t tell me
Ayumu: what?
Hiyono: are you jealous Narumi-san?
Ayumu: w-what! Are you crazy! Of course not!
Hiyono: well why are you telling me not to hang out with Hizumi-san?
Ayumu: well fine do whatever you want but then don’t come to me asking for help
Hiyono: >-< fine I won’t good bye
Later at the cafeteria Hiyono is sitting by herself and eating poky
Hizumi: what’s wrong Hiyono-chan? A moment ago you were so cheerful…………… well what about this weekend do you have any plans?
Hiyono: not really I had in mind to bother Narumi-san at his house but what do you have in mind?
Hizumi: well something simple like a walk in the park and then buy your favorite ice cream…………………… how’s the sound of that?
Hiyono: well ok fine
Hizumi: okay see you this weekend
(Hizumi left)
Hiyono: well I can ask Hizumi-san if he a Blade Children (Hiyono though)
After school
Ayumu left early the school and he go home all by him self
(In Ayumu house)
Ayumu: I’m home “well Madoka isn’t here yet………… o well…………… and what the matter with that girl? She think I was jealous is she crazy?!......” (Ayumu though)  
When Ayumu turnaround he looked at the living room there was Hizumi
Hizumi: hello Ayumu
Ayumu: Hizumi? What are you doing here?
Hizumi: I’m just going to warn you………………don’t get any closer to Hiyono-chan ever again
Ayumu: what?!
Hizumi: you heard me!
Then Hizumi left
Ayumu: “what’s the matter with him?!........... I need to go ask Rio” (Ayumu though)
(At night)
Ayumu: “Damn it! Why can’t I stop thinking about that stupid girl?”
(In the weekend)
Ayumu go to Rio place to ask her about Hizumi
Knock knock
Rio: I’m coming
(Rio opened the door)
Rio: Little brother?! What are you doing here?!
Ayumu: I need to ask you something
Rio: about what?!
Ayumu: can I come in?
Rio: sure!
(Ayumu go inside Rio house)
At the park with Hizumi and Hiyono where buying some of they favorite ice cream and when Hiyono was to pay for her own ice cream
Hizumi: no Hiyono it’s okay I pay your Ice cream
Hiyono: but………………
Hizumi: not but young lady ^^
Hiyono: *blush*
*they start to walk*
Hiyono: Hizumi-san can I ask you something?
Hizumi: sure what is it?
Hiyono: well……………mmmm…………a-are you a…………a
Hizumi: a Blade Child?
Hiyono: *surprised* how did you know that I was going to ask you that?
Hizumi: well is obvious that Ayumu-kun must told you
Hiyono: hehe *blush a little*
Hizumi: well yes I am
*silence*
Hiyono: well can I ask you something else?
Hizumi: sure what is it?
Hiyono: why did you start dating me?
Hizumi: *impressed* *blush*
(At Rio house)
Rio: what you were going to ask?
Ayumu: can you tell me a little bit about Hizumi?
Rio: why you want to know about him
Ayumu: well I want to know something about him so I can know why is he hanging on with……………………
Rio: with Hiyono-san?
Ayumu: *blush* well is not what you think
Rio: are you jealous little brother?
Ayumu: *blush*
Rio: well that doesn’t matter……………Well as I know Hizumi before have a girlfriend
Ayumu: a girlfriend?
(back in the park)
Hizumi: and as you know there are some people that are hunters the Blade Children. One day we where together and then from nowhere they come  
*in the past*
Yuki: Hizumi!! Let’s get out of here!!!
*Hizumi and Yuki began to run*
Then one of the hunter shoot his gun
Yuki: Hizumi look out!!!!!!!!! *push Hizumi*
*past over*
Rio and Hizumi: and she die
Ayumu and Hiyono: *shocked*
(in the park with Hizumi and Hiyono)  
Hiyono: but what that does have to do with me?
(Rio’s place)
Rio: because she look just like Hiyono-san
(In the park)
Hiyono: 0-0   
*several hours later*
(Rio’s place)
Ayumu: well thank you for telling me this……………… well see you later
*Ayumu left*
(The other day in school in lunch time)
Hiyono: Narumi-san! I’m sorry for what I tell you before
Ayumu: *sigh* it’s okay……… stupid girls always said stupid things
Hiyono: grrrrr well fine
Knock knock   
Hiyono: come in!
*opens the door*
(It’s was Hizumi)
Hizumi: Hiyono-chan can I talk to you?
Hiyono: ah! Sure
So then they both go out side the new paper club room       
Hiyono: what is it?
Hizumi: well I was wondering if you maybe…………… *blush* w-want to be my g-girlfriend?
Hiyono: *blush* I t-thank you Hizumi-san but I can’t be your girlfriend  
So Hiyono turns around and then Hizumi hold her my her hand
Hizumi: why not?!
Hiyono: well b-because you don’t love me for who I am you love me because I look like your girlfriend who died
Hizumi: *shocked*
Hiyono: and besides I t-think I love someone else……………but thanks anyway
Hiyono kiss Hizumi (in his cheek)  and get back to the room
Ayumu: what did Hizumi want?
Hiyono: *sit* well he ask me to be his girlfriend
Ayumu: he what?!
Hiyono: are you jealous Narumi-san?
Ayumu: of course not!
Hiyono: well I think I am going to tell him that I want to be his girlfriend! *get up walk to the door*
Ayumu: Hiyono wait!
Hiyono: *shocked*
Then Hiyono walk to Ayumu and give him a hug
Hiyono: thank you Ayumu
Ayumu: 0-0
Then they kiss
_________________________________________________________________  
The end……………………

I hope you like this fanfic please tell me what you think
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Author's Comments

well this is the first fanfic I made of Spiral :XD: I hope you like it

and I have to apologize to :iconmiso-hot3: for being so late (and maybe this fanfic is not what you was waiting for)

its only that I have a writer block and I most say thanks to my sister who helpped me with this :cries:

but I hope you like it

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:iconmiso-hot3:
Awh, the ending was sweet!^^ And please don't apologize! you did a good job:)

But I was surprised that in this story they met Hizumi differently than the actual story... Would it be okay if I just changed that part? Sorry!>.<

But I enjoyed reading it!:)

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I didn't slap you, I just high-fived you in the face!:aww:
:iconlanenadelmanga15:
thank you :blush:
and it's okay ^^

and I am glad you enjoy it ^^ :blush:

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I'm a Hirako Shinji fan girl I really love him >.<
I'm also a member of ~Shinji-Club
And I'm love Ichigo too >.<
Vizard Forever ^w^
:iconmiso-hot3:
I will try my best to draw your story out!:D

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I didn't slap you, I just high-fived you in the face!:aww:
:iconlanenadelmanga15:
good luck! :XD:

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I'm a Hirako Shinji fan girl I really love him >.<
I'm also a member of ~Shinji-Club
And I'm love Ichigo too >.<
Vizard Forever ^w^
:iconmiso-hot3:
Thanks!^^

It may take a while though...>.<

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I didn't slap you, I just high-fived you in the face!:aww:
:iconlanenadelmanga15:
don't worry
besides I was very late DX

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I'm a Hirako Shinji fan girl I really love him >.<
I'm also a member of ~Shinji-Club
And I'm love Ichigo too >.<
Vizard Forever ^w^
:iconmiso-hot3:
No you werent^-^

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I didn't slap you, I just high-fived you in the face!:aww:
:iconlanenadelmanga15:
so what was your favorite part?

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I'm a Hirako Shinji fan girl I really love him >.<
I'm also a member of ~Shinji-Club
And I'm love Ichigo too >.<
Vizard Forever ^w^
:iconmiso-hot3:
I liked the date part and the movies!^-^

It was funny! And I liked how Hizumi was the one to get scared instead of Hiyono!LOL

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I didn't slap you, I just high-fived you in the face!:aww:

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